Yep... Chapter 11 all queued. Also introducing a new character (who does not talk but barks sometimes).
I'm still on the fence about changing the genre of the story. It is definitely between keeping it as a "Mind Control" story or changing it to a "Romance". While "Coming of Age" is a possibility, I think the other two are the more dominant themes. I'll give it some more thought.
Anyway, thanks for continuing to contact me with feedback and for the nice votes! Your support is really appreciated!
Edit: I apologize for the formatting problem with scene changes. I fixed and resubmitted! Thanks for your patience!!!!!!!