Posted at 6:43 pm Updated: November 15, 2012 - 12:35 pm
Well folks I've tried to explore another scenario of emotional upheaval. I hope you like it. Penn Lady has edited it for me and offered her critique which made the story better.
It was originally intended to tell the story from both viewpoints and some of the feedback says that Caroline's viewpoint is lacking. Is there any interest in writing the story again from her point of view.