If I have had any criticisms so far, it is that the chapters are too short. That's really because I have been using chapters to designate a period of time, and I have been posting them as I write them.
I think that the criticism comes because people want to read more of the story. It doesn't matter what the chapter length is, so long as there is a good chunk of story to read.
So today I have put through three chapters at once. I think two are a bit longer anyway, but three together may help people who want more content, and there is a bit of nudity and a bit of violence as well.
And, as they say, the story continues….