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The beatings shall continue until morale improves

September 12, 2012
Posted at 6:15 pm
Updated: October 13, 2012 - 11:43 am

NOTE: This contest is over, I wrote the chapter myself - I did my best to channel a 'guy' inner monologue. I think some people think Bill is just dumb and shallow, but I hope I painted him as introspective but different than Wendy.

The beatings shall continue until morale improves

That is the title for chapter 32 of FFIV

I am busily working on Chapter 31 right now, which should give some of Jamie's perspective on what is I believe the most intense experience the girls have had to date.

I was thinking that Chapter 32 would be a long awaited journal entry from Bill Taylor. I am not the best at writing male journal entries - I don't think like a guy.

So what I'd be willing to do is work with someone who wants to be a 'guest author' in the story and write this chapter.

You can move the story forward some, and give Bill's thoughts and subtext of his actions and concerns.

I'd like to discuss with you before you get started on this grand scheme/experiment, but it would be really nice to see some one else's take on the head of the Taylor families inner most thoughts.