Posted at 10:42 am Updated: September 11, 2012 - 10:43 am
Chapter 2 repost.
I've resubmitted chapter 2, it should be up soon.
This is a small rewrite. It's roughly 1000 words longer than the old version but the story doesn't change, so you won't miss anyting by not rereading it. It just fixes some errors, rephrases some parts and hopefully has some better descriptions in places.
I'm going to look at chapter 1 next. Then I might do a bit more work on chapter 2, before focusing on chapter 3. So it might be a couple of days before chapter 3 is posted.