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August 28, 2012
Posted at 3:34 pm

Martha and Helen Masters one of a kind

Here is the E Mail of an anonymous reader and the only way I can respond is via this blog and the hope he or she is reading it:

The EMail:

So far I am enjoying your stories very much. This
GC universe you have created is amazing. With
that said, I have notice a name inconsistency in
this story (adventure of a greenie) that have made
reading difficult. You introduced Roy's mother as
Martha Masters and then later called her Helen
Masters. In this chapter 6, you have used both
names Martha and Helen to refer to her. Just
wanted to bring this to your attention. Keep up
the good work.

Thank you for your kind words and thank you for bringing that to my attention. This happened due to a rewrite and me copying and pasting paragraphs from the old into the new. I simply overlooked the fact that I called Roy's Mother Martha in the new version and Helen in the old.
I will fix this of course and thank you for pointing it out.