I started this one with only a title. I just kept typing without a plot in mind.
I am so sorry to everybody for the length. I have been trying to keep them to half that length, but I kept putting too many circumstances into it.
I never meant for the daughter to part of the story; just incentive for the mother to be kept in line.
I added the coersion by the husband for a reason to leave him. I could have made it much shorter.