I've recently posted up an updated to Chapter 24 of Family Feud IV. I think you will like the changes if you've already read when I first posted it up - I invite you to take a look.
I seldom get feedback on the story, but when I do it's usually someone who is also an author or someone who is very analytic. I think that is neat.
I went through a super long dry spell in my writing - but I am half-way done with chapter 25 and think I will be back and cracking for a while.
I put a lot of effort this time into describing more of the sexuality- as the story gets deeper I felt it was important to do that. It is not my forte' but I hope you find I did a satisfactory job.