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May 7, 2012
Posted at 8:57 am

Return to Nemaha River Bend

I have not got many responses to the story "Jenny's Ordeal." Most of the comments were that it was too long, and people are not willing to wade through something that long.

I wrote it in parts because it would take too long to load up and go through it.

Return to River Bend is a shortened version of an episode that was inserted into "Jenny's Ordeal."

In hindsight, I have left out physical descriptions of the two main characters that would have been nicer to have included.

I would appreciate any comments; good or bad about the story.