Ok folks, I just submitted the final edition of "These Girls Can Play".
My humble thanks to Turbo for his proofreading, and to Orblover for his encouragement.
I think that if you read the original, and it, as Turbo states, "Made your hair hurt", please give this a read. I believe you'll find it to be a 100% better read.
Now on to finishing, "Deanna" and "Craft Faire Love"...