It's a new angle for me as a writer, writing from Cindy's point of view. I had fun with it.
Yeah, it's a little bit of that rapid-fire, stream of consciousness thing, not exactly the carefully measured words of a precocious fourteen year old genius whose writing is impressing teachers and causing conversations among liberal arts professors at universities, but I wanted it to sound like she was excited and happy and writing her diary rather than a research paper.
To tell you the truth, I get kind of happy reading it over. Kid makes me smile. what can I say?