I have just submitted a new story - a poem, really, which was suggested to me by an e-pal of mine named Anna Partridge, who writes erotic verse. She was having some trouble with the scansion, she said, and I volunteered to see if I could clean it up. In the process, I produced a new version, which she liked, and which I have posted with her permission.
It was fun to do, and it was a nice break from Christie and the High School Hookers.
Thanks, Anna. I hope to rip off more of your ideas in the future.
And thanks, too, to peregrinf, who suggested the final touch.