Chapter Five has just been put in for submission.
My thanks go out to Bachgen who kindly edited my first four chapters.
I'll be posting each chapter as soon as it's done then send it off for editing since I always hate waiting for a chapter on a story. I'd prefer to read a rough version of the chapter now than wait to read the perfect copy later, but I'm just impatient I guess!
Please keep feedback coming It's the only reason I'm putting this work on here so please keep it coming!