Having read the pitiful amount I have posted and what I have already written I made a decision. Starting in Chapter 3 the story will move from its current format to 1st person. Chapters 1 and 2 will remain as they are, but chapter 3 is going to take at least a week to rewrite. The only good news in this is the postings should get longer... I hope. Chapter 3 I know has doubled in size for what I have already write and gained more depth, at least to me and while I enjoy your feedback, I really write more my enjoyment, which is why I have about 15 unposted stories laying around on my computer. Anyways I waiting to give those who keep checking on me the update, and I hope those who read chapter 3 in the future read this to understand the shift in writing.