I've been getting some good feedback from a few readers. I hope ya'll will continue to tell me what you think.
As long as the feedback is not a personal attack against my parentage or my sterling character, I'll try to respond.
I'm a very new writer. As such, I have much to learn and I learn best by trying and failing and getting up and trying again.
First, I'm working on the dialog of the story. I KNOW I have much to learn. It's been over forty years since college and I've only done proposals and technical writing since.
So, be patient and I'll keep posting the scribblings of a "known lunatic" to quote another and much better writer.
My stories will be based on the types of stories I like the best. If I get better (highly doubtful) I may try to write on other topics, but I need all the help I can get to get enough courage and to get off my lazy butt. So, writing on topics I LIKE helps a bit.