Well chapter is finally up, and I am get a lot of great responses. I will respond to those who commented soon. Again the tags will be added when they are part of the story, and just to let you know there will be violence in the story, but you are dealing with a crime boss, something has to happen to someone at some point. I hope that chapter 3 will not take too much time to edit and I do hope to have it up soon, but work went from 5 days a week to 4 over nights and messed up my sleep something awful. I have done nothing but eat dinner shower sleep then head to work all 4 days, and then with family for the other 3 days my writing has gotten the short end of the stick. I should be use to it soon enough, but I am keeping my fingers crossed. Well that is it for now.