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September 2, 2011
Posted at 11:18 am

I can't leave well enough alone

I have posted a new version of the "The Mortification of the Flesh," with the ending slightly, but, I think, significantly revised. It's more nuanced now, and more effective, I believe. But the story is essentially the same, and no one should feel obliged to reread it. I mention the change only to keep my friends up to date.

I liked the previous ending, but sometimes you get an idea, and it won't leave you alone. This is one of those times.

Oh, Lord, I want to move on now.