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August 9, 2011
Posted at 1:31 pm
 

Re-worked longer "The Package Deal"

I didn't like how The Package Deal ended last time. Now I now what happened later and so chapter 8 has been rewritten, a ninth chapter added to Part 2 and a Part 3 is coming. Sometimes stories have to unfold in real time so that they can be told. And once again, as has been the case in most of the stories I have related, there are unintended consequences to actions. Sometimes because of the lack of vision, sometimes because people do not always tell the truth and sometimes because of hidden agendas. I hope you will enjoy... [I posted the new chapter 8 today 9AUG2011, so if the chapter you see is earlier... wait a day and grab the new one.] Thanks. VWA