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July 30, 2011
Posted at 10:29 am
Updated: July 30, 2011 - 10:31 am

Questionable Discipline

There is a style of story I call "I was minding my own business when..."

It is kind of the penthouse letters format. You know the old format of "I don't ordinarily write to Penthouse Letters, but I just had to tell you about this time my neighbor and her 19 year old daughter knocked on my door and.." then he describes how these hot women wanted sex from him for no apparent reason than they are cock hounds?

Unstablxxx is the author of a story that fits into that genre,

It is called "Questionable Discipline" and I would highly suggest it if you are a fan of my Family Feud series.

He does a really great job using that Penthouse Letters premise to write this story. He adds a layer of plausibility and explores some of the motivations of the characters in his world.

The set up is the main character marries a woman with a step daughter. He is completely oblivious to their history and one night his wife approaches him about wanting discipline for herself and her daughter.

That isn't the premise of Family Feud, but there are still a lot of similarities which is one reason I enjoy this author's writing and suggest it.

The author has a lot of other gems that I am slowly reading and going through. He is very clever in his writing and so far I would put his writing up there with Hooked6 and Vulgus as some of the best I have seen.