This is a new story going into the cue. It's not Hemingway but I think it's a fun stroke story and a decent read. The feedback I've gotten has been very positive. It's about a 15 year old girl who wants to be good to her widowed dad. (No plot stretch here.)
I'm going to leave on the scoring, fully expecting some hairballs to trash it. But I also have my fans, who I hope will counter them. However, I no longer accept anonymous email, so for those people who want to be mean on top of trashing the story, they'll just have to sign their emails and I'm going to ask them why they're being mean.
Writing porn for fun,