PROBLEM (see below) fixed as of about 8:15 pm Eastern time Sunday June 3rd 2011. If you scored me on the previous totally messed up published version - please read again - the story text is now correct, and makes sense! (And perhaps re-do your score - your score re-do will write over you previous - at least in TPA score - not sure about normal score - but - pretty please? Wasn't my fault, sir!) Thanks, all - Depends.
PLEASE NOTE - something went wrong in publishing the original Chapter 1 of A Family Solution. The file I submitted was OK, but somehow, the first bit was repeated, and overwrote other text, so it's a total mess!!!! Nothing to do but wait until it is re-published from a fresh copy of the text file, and perhaps some explanation of how that happened. The very low scores are of course reflecting that screw-up. Apologies, but honestly, guv, it wasn't my fault!!!!