I have taken a look at my earlier writing, and decided to go back today and re-do "Family Feud One".
I've tried to correct grammar, make it more readable and add some bonus content.
I suppose that is what they do when they sell you the blu-ray version of a movie. Enhance the picture in your mind, and give you a few deleted scenes that may improve your viewing pleasure.
I want to do the same with FF2, although it is 30 chapters which means it will be quite an undertaking.
I am also having so much fun with the unfinished FF3 that I don't want to get too distracted. It is definitely on my radar to do.
I hope my efforts will improve your experience in reading and make it more enjoyable.