Both Luvirini's Journey and the side stories are posted in new versions that have gone through external editing, so hopefully they are more readable.
Unfortunately the editor will not have time to continue editing, so I am looking for an editor that can keep pointing to me where I switch to past tense in middle of a sentence, use too complex sentence structures, messed up punctation and similar bad habits of mine.
I have enjoyed the feedback I have gotten. I do not reply to such unless there is either a question or some other indication that a reply is wished.
I do try to answer all questions, though in quite many cases the answer is that the future side stories will include more on that topic.