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Response to anonymous feedback

April 14, 2011
Posted at 1:37 pm

My story "Albion: Elizabeth's Story" is an interlude in the story "Albion" by Duke of Ramus, with his permission. Duke of Ramus has a continuation of his own story under way. I will not venture into that world until after I have seen where Duke of Ramus takes the story.

As for "Going, Going...", I confess little skill -- yet -- in voicing a 15-year-old. It is one area that I need to work on. I will hopefully improve.

As I said in the earlier post, I felt the mm sex and the S/m were essential for the development of several characters. I warned at the top of the chapters containing mm sex (but not the S/m passage.) Those same chapters contained passages relating to other characters. I hope those entire chapters were not skipped by many readers.

Thank you for pointing out grammar errors.