I wondered if any of my readers might be interested in looking at stories at an earlier stage. I'm not looking for an editor (as I understand the term).
I'm interested in comments like, "Why would Sarah do that? It's not like her", or "Her name was Tina on the last page", or "This part is boring", or "Tell me more about Ned", or "It would be cool if Carl banged Ursula but Wendy found out"...
So far I haven't been able to write story requests, and I kind of doubt I could collaborate with anyone on the writing itself, but within a world and a framework that I set up, I am interested in how it comes across to readers and open to change. Your comments could well change the story before it is posted.
If interested, send me an email, maybe a word or two about which of my stories you liked, what themes turn you on, etc.