The Maze Experiment - Chapter 11
It took me a full week to write chapter 11, but I'm really happy with how it came out. It's 24 pages large in total and it doesn't even feature any sex hehe.
It's a good preperation for chapters to come though and I hope you liked the way I introduced the characters!
Originally I wanted to add Leo in the story as well, but earlier this week I was thinking; well I already got Lucia in the story as an Italian and... It might be more fun if I adept my formula a bit and add more 2 more women in instead of 2 more then, as I had originally intended.
I actually did do some math on the ideal amount of subject numbers, but that'll all be explained by the doctor later on in the story.
So... With that decided Leo had to die! He's actually the first person that died in the story so far. Without giving away too much of the future plot, I do have a couple more deaths planned, but I won't reveal who or how. You'll have to find that out for yourself as the story continues to evolve.
In the future I hope to publish somewhat smaller chapters though. I spent 5 hours of just proof reading today and it was becoming a real drag. I probably still left a couple of mistakes in, but the technical part of the story should be quite fine now.
Ps. Ilse's looks are inspired on Simone Simmons, the singer of the Dutch symphonic metal (goth) band Epica. You'll likely find some nice pictures of her if you Google her. ;-)
I had the pleasure of meeting her in real life and it's fair to say that the pictures, no matter how hot, don't do her justice. -snicker-