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TME ch 9 and 10

January 16, 2011
Posted at 12:41 pm

Chapter 9 was submitted yesterday and chapter 10 is submitted a few minutes ago, waiting for approval.

Unfortunately chapter 10 is one of the smaller chapters, but I think that plot wise it's a very nice addition. It also featured a bit more comedy than the previous chapters.

Poor poor Gregor...

I don't really know when I'll have the next chapter ready, but it'll be done within the coming 2 weeks.

If you don't want any spoilers about the upcoming storyline then I suggest you stop reading at this point. :-)

I intend to add more subjects to the maze, so the coming chapter will likely feature more abductions. I also haven't forgotten yet about sir Clarke and his children (who are both adult btw, I don't have anything against adding teenagers, but it wouldn't be realistic in the story), but those will be added in a few chapters from now.

Atm I intend to focus on getting more subjects in and explore Janneke's relationship with Cor and Eva. I figured a woman in such a situation would turn jealouse at having to compete with a woman she considers more desirable and hey, I rarely hear men complaining about being surrounded by beautiful women, so it'll be interesting to see how this will develop.

One thing I am struggling a bit with is what else I can add to the 'heaven' level, to make the stay of subjects more enjoyable. If you have any good ideas about activities that people would enjoy in the dark then feel free to e-mail me. I'll likely include your ideas! :-)