Chapter eleven in the Headhunter is dark, VERY dark. Things go on in chapter eleven that I find very disturbing. I've tried three times to tone it down, and each time it just doesn't work.
I have found most of my stories (Yes I have more than the headhunter) are turning very dark, and sometimes it works to tone it down, sometimes however it does not. Before you send hate mail concerning the last scene, READ IT CAREFULLY.
Also I have made a concerted effort to start something a little more lighthearted. Benefactor's gift is coming along, and Hopefully the first chapter or so will be ready shortly.
The reason for the darkness is that my father has a degenerative brain disease, and is in danger of falling into a nonresponsive state. My father's brain is dissolving from the inside out a few cells at a time. I ask for prayers, and that if you, or anyone you know, has extreme headaches on a regular basis get checked. We didn't catch my father's until it was too late to do anything. I beg you not to let this agony happen to anyone YOU love.