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October 31, 2010
Posted at 12:32 pm
 

My first story

I have received a lot of feedback on my first book most negative :) butt I agreed with them and have decided that I will make some drastic changes in the second installment like he won't be able to have as many weapons and not so manta powerful weapons the only improvements to his body will be his immortality i.e. "immune to infection and not aging" he will only be able to use his animals for travel