Thank you "K", for pointing out a few of my grammar mistakes and probably making Adwin's Story a little more readable for anyone who hasn't read it yet. For those of you who read it already and somehow read this blog also, you don't need to read chapter one again. Nothing substantial changed, just dotted some i's and crossed some t's.
In other thoughts, for just a moment last night Adwin scored a perfect "10" (after 2 votes). Its the first time I have seen one of my tales with that score so it was neat enough to take a screen shot. Pics or it didn't happen as they say.
Next time in my blog, how I talked two girls into a threesome with me and why I will never do that again.