The only nit I ever got on the "Thadeus Hamilton" tale was about his almost instant coversion from school loner to 'up-to-his-eyeballs-in-love'.
So, creative fellow that I am, I filled in a few blanks. The origin for his change of heart may surprise a few, but I hope you enjoy the new version.
I was also able to modify the text to show thought sequences or key words in 'italics'.
Thanks again folks for all your comments.
Warmest regards, Ol'Mac