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Friends in Heat Chapter 21

August 11, 2010
Posted at 7:21 am

Friends in Heat Chapter 21 has been posted. I have also made some significant changes to Chapter 18. The sex scenes involving Hans and his future fiancé Vicky have been extended and hopefully now Hans' unexpected marriage proposal to Vicky in Chapter 20 makes some more sense and hopefully now you can forgive the guy for being a spontaneous idiot.

I know that in my previous blog post I said that I won't add any new chapters to Friends in Heat, but my editing project took an unexpected turn and I ended up with a completely different story instead of just a revamped version of FIH!

Right now I am happy with the addition of Tammy, Uncle Teddy Bear and Emil to the blend and I like where they are taking the story. But I will still be making some significant changes to chapters 1 through 18 in the near future, so keep your eyes open for those changes.

I would love to hear your thoughts and suggestions about all this. I do get some positive feedback from my male readers...please keep them coming guys and I will try to keep you coming the best I can!

I still have not received any comments from my female readers, so if you're a woman and my stories turn you on please drop me a couple of lines and put a smile on my face.