First off, I want to thank those who have given me feedback. A few of you got a direct reply. I appreciate you all writing.
I am considering everything suggested as I write the second story in the "Edenton" series. So far, Erin goes home and comes out....as a nudist. A few days later, they head to the mall, hook up with a couple, and Jen gives somebody a blow job. I know it's not much of a plot yet. Any more suggestions for this story or others, you know what to do.
For those wanting a school story, that will follow the "Summer" story (the current one). It's almost done.