Many of you have noticed that I have recently posted chapter 8. Sorry again for the delays but it was necessary. Writing some of these scenes isn't easy for me sometimes and I always want to make sure I'm giving you my best work.
Anyway, there was a mix-up with the italics. In the last chapter, whenever Dawn and George would communicate telepathically I would put their words in Italics to make it easier to understand. For whatever reason, that didn't translate over. So this afternoon I'll try to update the story with the proper italicized phrases.
If you are having trouble, a good rule of thumb is that whenever George and Dawn are talking to just each other, you can assume it's telepathic. I haven't heard any complaints yet, but I wanted to let everyone know what the deal was.
Anyway, thanks to everyone who has already read it and voted on it. You guys are the best! Also, I need to thank my editors for all their hard work. It took a long time to release because they kept finding better ways to do things. So flame them! LOL.
I'm kidding of course. Naitachal, Brian Lowry and Val deserve much of the credit. Special thanks goes to Spacer X for being so cutthroat in his corrections. He's great for bouncing ideas off of and for spotting inconsistencies in my work. I imagine he has a lot of practice with his story being so long. You should all read it btw!
I also have to thank my friend from eastern Europe, Mozartfan, for the boost in confidence. It's cool to have die hard fans worldwide.