Message from: john (I started to post his e-mail but decided not to)
He wrote the following which he pulled from chapter two:
”He began finger-fucking me from behind. I moaned
loud as I reached a climax and the cock of man I
was sucking (I mean Peter) got hard. try to get
and editor to check your grammer and you need to
figure out which character your talking about in
the story you say that Peter was out cold on the
bed then when Harriet shows the tape to the woman
the tape says Peter is having sex while Gary is
fucking her is Peter asleep or is Gary will you
make up your mind please.”
Here is what I wrote back to him, “You know I went back to correct that and when I read what you had it looked so wrong like I was all mixed up. THEN I went to the story and looked to “fix” it when I discovered that it was very clear whom I was describing and what was going on. So this is what I did. And I did it just for people like you that feel you have to pick apart our stories.
It was NOT confusing, but as I said I did clarify who “He” was (Gary) and that while Peter (my sedated husband) was physically reacting to stimuli.
Look I am not perfect and I get upset when people like you pick my stories apart, if I “confuse” you so much, just do not read my stories. If you think by doing things like this is going to change me or make me a better writer so you and others like you can read a better written story, you are not. In the past people like you got me so down I stopped writing all together.
I do not want to mislead or confuse, but in the case you pointed out, if you read what I wrote you can see (that is if you want to see it) who is who and what is being done.
Shit the more I wrote you the madder I am getting. Do me a favor, just do not read my poorly written stories, you AND I will feel much better.
You ask why I stopped writing, well now you see what stopped me.