I am overwhelmed by the huge number of responses and I would like to thank everyone who volunteered. I can't imagine a higher compliment to my story despite it's flaws.
My new editor has given me corrections for the entire story to date and I'll be going over and correcting each chapter over time. Unfortunately this means that chapter 12 will be a bit later in coming. I hope to have something available for you by this time next week. Until then, my thanks.