The short story "Human Mattress" (2008) by Hungry Guy is the first of a pair of stories about a college student with a secret desire to sleep on women as mattresses to use them sexually and in other ways at the same time. He does not force them to do this. He discovers, to his surprise and delight, that many young women at his school want to do it!
Mr. Guy's writing is crisp and direct. His grammar and spelling are top notch. The story itself moves along swiftly, without any needless digressions.
The greatest strength of this quite short story is in its depiction of the reactions of the young women. When our hero, Doug, first reveals his secret desire, he is denounced by campus feminists. Later, one by one, curious women ask to become his mattress for a night.
What does it mean to be a human mattress? I'll quote directly from the story, where Doug explains it to a woman:
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"I'll tie you to the bed with your ass up against the headboard and your legs splayed out in a V against the headboard and your ankles tied to the top of the posts. Then I'll tie your wrists up over your head to the corners at the foot of the bead. You'll be under the covers and I'll sleep on top of you all night long. You'll be my human mattress."
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Sounds all cuddly and cozy, doesn't it? Well, almost. But there's a bit more to the procedure, as Doug goes on to explain:
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"This is called a spider gag. The ring goes in your mouth, but the 'spider legs' stick out so that you can't swallow it by accident or flip it out of your mouth with your tongue."
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Once his naked woman has been tied in place with her mouth held open by a spider gag, Doug climbs aboard, inserts his penis into her mouth, and settles in for a restful night.
Did I say restful? Eventful is more like it.
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"Relaxing his hips, he let his cock slide down into her mouth. He felt his cock bending sharply at the back of her mouth and down her throat. The feeling was incredible!
Despite her bounds, her body was bucking and twitching under him, and her gag reflex was massaging his cock with so much strength that he didn't have to pump her mouth. She did all the work. In a moment, he shot his wad down her gasping throat over and over again in one of the most powerful orgasms he had ever felt. Her gag reflex continued milking his cock, and he kept flooding her throat, in a vicious feedback loop.
And what a rush, too! To use a woman like this! To know that she was experiencing utter humiliation and intense pain for no other reason than to give him physical pleasure. Oh man! What a rush!"
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Need I say more, my friends?
Do yourself a favor and read this story. If for no other reason than to find out why Doug no longer needs to get out of bed to use the toilet at night.
If you've read "My First Rape" but not yet read "My Second Rape" then you're in for a treat.*
Why is the sequel better than the original? Let me list the reasons:
1. Readers scored the second story higher than the first story (5.51 compared to 4.71).
2. More readers chose to add the second story to their library than the first (39 compared to 32).
3. The second story is much longer than the first (141 kb compared to 47 kb).
4. The second story has much, much more sex than the first one. The first story was focused on the kidnapping, rape, and enslavement of Wendy. The second story takes place one year later, by which time Wendy has become a devoted slave and total sex addict. In the second story early stages, the Master and Wendy have lots of sex. In the later stage, after Wendy helps the Master to kidnap Ivory, he has sex with both girls, and makes them have sex with one another. Let me tell you all that when I was writing those scenes, I felt like my computer keyboard was about to melt. They are THAT hot!
*(Assuming that you did not utterly detest the first story. In that case, you're probably not reading my blog either. So there.)
Our hero, whose name just coincidentally happens to be Steve, now has the ultimate power over women. His wife got magically enthralled into becoming his sex slave in Chapter 1. Now in Chapter 2 the younger of her two sisters gets the same treatment.
Isn't that what you'd like to do with your wife and her sisters?
There's more to come after this chapter. Steve has one more sister-in-law to enslave. Then he'll be done enslaving his wife and her sisters. But will that be enough for him? Steve is an ambitious sort. His magical spirit consort Anastasia assures him that he can have as many sex slaves as he wishes.
How big are Steve's appetites?
How big would yours be?
Drop me and line and let me know. All communications will be kept private.
The short story "Creating My Perfect Whore" (2011) by Farber Skarn is a delight. It perfectly encapsulates the male fantasy of abducting a sweet young virgin and turning her into a degraded sex slave. Unfortunately, it is the only story by this author on Storiesonline. I wish he had given us more.
This story was written before Storiesonline instituted its age limit for female sex. Mr. Skarn wrote before girls had to be at least 14. His story was grandfathered in, since it pre-dates that rule. I attempted to email Mr. Skarn to ask him about his writing, but got no response. So I'm afraid that this single story is all that we will see from him.
First, let's get the technical writing issues out of the way. Mr. Skarn is a skillful writer who knows grammar and spelling. His writing is free of the sorts of errors that could otherwise be distracting. Second, he knows what he wants sexually and he says it. He doesn't beat around the bush. Rather, he beats around a hairless slit.
In closing, let me whet your appetite with this edited set of quotes from the story (taking a few sentences and phrases from different spots in this story and combining them into a single paragraph):
"I had first thought a 6-7 year old would be the way to go to serve this purpose. However, I wanted to speed the process up, and I am admittedly a boob man, so then I thought about maybe a 14-15 year old. There's nothing better than slutty little high school bitch. However, after a long mental debate, I decided to go somewhere in between. A 10-11 year old would have the perfect amount of innocence coupled with being right on the cusp of womanhood. Her name was Kim Clark, but her friends called her Kimmy. She was 10 years old, and about to be 11 in 6 weeks. She played soccer and was also about to become a cheerleader. Kimmy had dark brown hair, tan skin and the perfect amount of baby fat left on her. Her breasts were already developing nicely, and surely had to be the biggest in her 6th grade class. Each day she wore tight or low-cut tops to drive all the horny young boys crazy. I couldn't wait to teach her what it truly is to be a whore."
To paraphrase an old saying, "Build a better wife-trap for men to enslave their wives and sisters-in-law and those men will beat a path to your door".
That's my conclusion after the phenomenal response to my new "Enslaving My Wife and Her Sisters" in my brand, spanking new SPELLBINDER: BELL, BOOK, AND COCK universe.
I uploaded that story in the waning hours of Monday 6 February 2017. Within minutes, it had been downloaded 285 times.
Right now, as of this writing a couple of hours before midnight on the following day (7 Feb) the story has been downloaded an additional 2,768 more times.
Writing for Storiesonline has made me acutely aware of reader response. Sometimes I write something I like a lot and it turns out that most readers hate it. As I tweak my writing and watch how readers respond, I am beginning to see something about what people prefer in my writing.
So far, my stories that garnered the largest and fastest number of downloads have been "Enslaving My Wife and Her Sisters" and "Watch Me Sodomize Your Daughters, Bitch".
What do I conclude from this?
Family values are important!
Apparently, I touched something deep in our collective male psyche here. I am currently working on the next stories in the "Enslaving My Wife and Her Sisters" serial, in which our hero adds each of his sisters-in-law to his harem of sex slaves. Beyond that, there is plenty of room for more serials or single stories inside the SPELLBINDER: BELL, BOOK, AND COCK universe.
A similar theme occurred in the story "Watch Me Sodomize Your Daughters, Bitch", which is a pastiche of the first two chapters of my first work, the massive (and massively unpopular) serial/book "Welcome to My World" inside THE MASTER'S WORLD universe. Many readers found that science fictional, other-worldly male paradise just too far over the top. They boggled at one man owning hundreds of gorgeous female sex slaves while robots did all the work on the planet he owned. It was just too much of a much.
So I scaled things back following that debacle (in terms of ratings, if not downloads, which are still the largest by volume of anything I've written to date). My next two stories were "My First Rape" and "My Second Rape". The first was not too well-received. The second, which built upon the first, was much more popular in ratings, although it still lags the first in downloads.
My aim is to strike a balance between stories I find stroke-worthy and ones that work that magic for my readers.
I'd be happy to hear your feedback. So drop me a line.