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Home Invasion was inspired by the TV series The Power, in which women acquired the ability to fire electric shocks from their fingertips. It removed the physical dominance men have always had. This has quite a fundamental effect on make/female relationships, so in this story the male is old, and losing strength, while the girls are super fit. And of course he can't bear to reveal the truth, that now he's weaker than girls, so he can't summon reinforcements either. Luckily everyone is good-natured in this story even though, coming from different eras, and different backgrounds, they have plenty to clash about.
Hmmm, the final chapter doesn't seem to have been too satisfying, judging by the voting! So the question is whether I need to extend it a bit, to bring the dickgirl paradise thing more to life, or to backtrack and make it less extreme and perhaps a more believable/less ridiculous. Any thoughts?
I ran out of energy on a story I started quite some time ago, so I've started posting the first chapters. Hopefully a few votes and comments will inspire me to get on with it. Tbh it mainly started with a too-tempting alliteration - Spinsters in Space - and went from there. Possibly it's become something a bit too deep so I am out of my depth, but let's see.
Just girding myself for the ending, collecting my thoughts. This stroke story just started from the rendering on the title page, and grew page by page from there really, without much of an overall vision. It's ended up being a story about power.
First of all, the central character is a man who's small - smaller than his daughter and some of her friends. Although he is probably stronger, it nevertheless takes away the usual male physical power base.
Other sources of power are reason, with which his daughter is at least as adept as he is himself, and sex drive/attraction: he's so highly sexed that if a hot girl touches him, he can't stop her escalating things to whatever extent she wants. In this way physical power comes to reside with the girls.
The other ingredient is adolescence and the acquisition of power, from being a child. Oh and sexual curiosity, obviously. 'Obviously' is a word used by teens to express power of course, laying claim to an incontrovertible truth :)
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