I finally submitted the latest chapter in Fuck Weed (should be up very soon) but I have to admit, I'm not really feeling much love for it. The main reason being that it doesn't move the story along very much, in fact, from a narrative point of view it doesn't need to be.
As I often find, I tend to ramble. I come up with neat ideas that I start putting in that don't really move the story along. The sex is fine, maybe even pretty good, but it starts to feel a little repetative and pointless.
So that said, it's time to wrap this story line up, I have one more chapter in the works to finish off the story and tie up loose ends. Then it's off to something new.
Kind of looking at either a science experiment gone wrong making the young pretty (what'd you expect) researcher into a total slut, or my original idea for a sci fi tale (tail?) of a beach house being invaded by breeding aliens made up mostly of beautiful women with big cocks and mind control gadgets. Any preferences?
Anyway, and I know I've said it before, I want to make the next story much tighter and focused on moving the plot and characters along (not forgetting this is about the sex after all). Should make for a better read I think.
As always I do appreciate your feedback, positive or negative. In fact the above realization bame from an honest criticism from a reader that enjoys a lot of what I do. So thank you.
Wow, this one took a long time to get out. I don't know why, I had the entire progression set out, and I do for the next two chapters. But for some reason this section took forever to write and edit.
So, on to the next chapter while it's clear in my mind...
Then again, I do have that idea for a home being invaded by aliens that can turn any human into a sexual plaything with the flash of a device. Aliens are beautiful women, but with huge cocks so they can mate with human women, and an uber male alien with an even bigger cock.
Not sure which to go with next. What do you think? Continue the story? Or take a break and go with something different?
First of all, to my fans, both of you, sorry it took me so long to come out with the newest chapter. It's been far to long, and I suck for it.
As I always seem to do. I start off with a simple idea and blow it all out of proportion. The Fuck Weed story was supposed to be a couple chapters, tops. Well, I finally finished Chapter 7 after writing myself into a corner I didn't want to be in. But I'm ultimately happy with the outcome. The only problem is that I have at least one final chapter to wrap up the story. In fact, I have ideas for several chapters, where to stop.
I'm wondering if I should take a break and maybe whip up a story or two I have rambling around in the dark empty recesses of my mind.
What do you think? Try and wrap Fuck Weed up without too many complications? Or should I write up a (hopefully) short story before heading back to the island?
Hi, I'm MC, and I have a verbosity problem. There, I said it. I just don't seem to be able to write a simple story. It always turns out to be this long, complicated, long, verbose, long, well, long epic.
I really don't know why I do this, it just sort of seems to happen. My current story, Fuck Weed, was originally meant to be a single self contained story. But yet here I am working on chapter 7, of at least 8. I seem to start writing and fleshing out characters and all of a sudden POW, it's another friggin' epic.
I need help, I really do. Next project, short, one single short story, self contained, done. That is if I ever get there.
OK, so I said no more long stories. So what did I do? I wrote another long story. Just posted the first chapter. No real sex I'm afraid.
I actually have the next chapter written, but still have to proof it. Should be ready to post maybe for the weekend. I thought I'd try the tease first and see if poeple come back to see what happens.
So yeah, hard to build up characters and situations that I find interesting without writing a lot. Perhaps thats the sign of a poor author in that I can't seem to distill the essence into a few short paragraphs.