I thought that I was done with Out of This World and was working on ideas for a new story. But images of Lola and her family kept popping into my head.
So I incorporated the new ideas into Out of This World. As someone kindly mentioned to me the new chapters seem a bit over the top. But this is not a real story and I am just having fun with the characters. I do not condone their actions, they do things that should not be done in the real world and by real parents to their children.
But this is a stroke story and I write about whatever turns me on. So the characters do whatever my dirty mind tells them to do. I hope that you will find something that turns you on in the new and future chapters.
Your input and suggestions are always welcome. It is always nice to know that there are still people out there who enjoy reading my stories and care about what happens next.
Have fun, be safe and enjoy.
I am adding a couple of new chapters to Out of This World 3 before starting to write the fourth installment of the series. Part 4 will be about the new kids growing up and joining in the fun with the family.
I also have a short story in the works, so if you are a fan of my writings keep checking my page.
While editing Out of this World 3, I realized that Lola and her family were not completely done with their antics yet. if you're a fan of the series, please give it another look and as always your suggestions, votes and comments are welcome and appreciated.
The first three chapters of Out of This World 3 have been reposted.
I have turned the voting back on.
The first three chapters of Out of This World 3 are up. You probably have noticed that there are no quotation marks for the dialog.
"What the hey!" I screamed, my eyes widening with shock."Where are my beautiful quotation marks?"
So I have resubmitted all three chapters, hopefully it's just a one-time technical glitch and will be fixed soon.
Meanwhile I have disabled the voting options on this story. I will turn the voting back on when the problem is fixed.