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Thank you

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I would like to thank all those lovely people who sent me feedback on Lucky Man. Most of you seemed to like it.

On the whole it seems that you were not enamored with the style. Writing a complete story in the present tense is, for me, much harder than using the past tense. It seems that many of you didn't like it. Don't worry I won't be making a habit of writing present tense stories.

Finally there is the issue of using single quotes. I recently took a creative writing course and found out that in the UK, the standard for publication is single quotes for normal dialogue and double quotes for secondary quotes. Since I intend to publish some of my work I thought it a good habit to get into.

Once again thank you, I was surprised at the score and even more surprised to find that the votes histogram analysis gives it a score that is almost a full point higher.

Stories that don't fit SOL

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As you all know Stories on SOL should have a sexual theme, even if if there is no graphic sex in the story. I've been writing a few recently that don't fit in with that requirement.
I have posted some, and I mean to post others on my own website www.smithkeng.wix.com/ken-smith

If you would like to read them just go to the site and register (free) and you will find them in the portfolio.

Here it is, My Festive Offering

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Well as promised I have submitted my festive offering, "Driving Home for Christmas". I submitted it tonight. It's a bit long so it might take Laseez a while to get it up. I hope you find it worth the time it takes to read it.
Merry Christmas.

Driving home for Christmas

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Just got to divide it into chapters for you Then I'll post it here. It's been up as a competition entry on another site, but the SOL version will be slightly improved.(homonyms removed and a few minor tweaks)

Should be ready in a week.

Back at last

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It's been a long time coming I know, but now at long last I've posted a new story. Play it again Sam started life as a 500 word competition entry for Ether Books. Now you get the chance to read the whole story. I hope you enjoy it.

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