Just submitted an updated chapter 10 to fix a few typos and added a bit to a paragraph early on. My mentor Amanda Serve pointed out to me that having the girls eat fast food dressed slutty wasn't a big deal before in the story, so I added a bit to address the guys change of thinking.
Chapter 10 has been submitted for posting. Hope you enjoy it. The Taylor's are going to the movies.
Chapter 9 is in the posting process.
Also, I have changed the sex level to some sex. As the Taylor's get back into the game, sec becomes a bigger part of the story.
Tried resubmitting chapter to Fix issues with " and '. Sadly, it didn't work so now I am trying a different option. Keeping my fingers crossed it will work.
Chapter 8 dropped all " and '. Somehow they are getting dropped in a formatting issue when I autosave to html. Not sure of the reason why. If anyome has any ideas let me know through the feedback function.