To my anonymous, vindictive "friend."
Thank you for being an adult and changing your score. I felt it necessary to comment and compliment someone on being fair, just as much as I did when treated unfairly.
If someone doesn't like my stories - for whatever reason: content, plot or otherwise, that's okay with me. You simply don't have to read it. I just want a fair shake: nothing more.
My "friend" has changed his mind and done that and for that, I give you my gratitude.
A real fan! He/she has either a hardon or a wet cunt for my ass becasue they did it again! This goes to prove how someone with an IQ of two points below plant life can have their voice heard. The trouble is this person is anonymous. They aren't adult enought to act like an adult and send me an email and sign their name. I feel sorry for people like that. I may be a sick, twisted bitch,but at least I can admit it. I doubt that whoever is votong 1.1.1 can't read.
I mean how else can you have a technical of 1? In just the first chaper, I almost wrote a complete pedo story in itself - that should have qualitifed for at least a five -right?
I'd like to challenge my 1.1.1 friend to a writer's challenge any topic you like and we'll let the public judge. No? Didn't think so
Well, it seem like some gutless bastard doesn't have the balls (or tits) to send me an email flaming me why they either didn't like the story or where my grammar was so bad as to warrant a score of 1.1.1
This is just childish vindictiveness and it's sad to see a reader who doesn't have the education to know what grammar is much less spell it or to recognize a plot if it bit them in the ass.
Do me a favor will you folks, If you don't like my brand of smut, don't read it. I coded the story properly and I'll bet you a deep throat blow job that the fucker that voted that 1.1.1 didn't know what nepiophilia (or infantophilia) is and was too stupid to look it up. If my grammar sucks, let me know and I'll try harder. The only part of the score I can't argue is the appeal.
Sorry folks. Even though Shayla is my first story, I thought it was pretty well written and my editor is pretty damn good. I don't expect to please everyone, but as adults on an adult site, I expected to be treated fairly. I try to give you folks a story that's readable, with a semblance of proper grammar and with plot and some character development.
I also realistically expected some flak because of the subject matter. My nasty self formulated this story after seeing a true-to-life tragedy on CNN where a woman sold her 2 YO daughter for sex. The child was found murdered. Both the parent and the killer were caught. My story is sort of a sick romantic where there's no force or coercion used on the child. - it's just a nasty little fictional tale.
So, when you see a tanked score below 8, you know some fuck-head deliberately sabatoged the numbers.