A bit of a rewrite for this perverted story of young Hannah's various introductions to sex and her eventual empowerment, along with an intro that conveys less darkness than my first attempt. The second and third scenes link better now and hopefully the ending pulls things together more clearly as well. I am always revising so any comments can only help.
Hmmm, I'm on my third ending so far, for my schoolgirl gymnast slave, and I'm still not quite sure about it. I suppose the real ending is when she surgically castrates her abusers, but then I feel the story needs to relate what her future is and why. I'm not even sure if I should give that more words, or fewer.